We are send to bring the Gospel

Hier ist der Text – er ist bereits weitgehend korrekt. Ich habe nur eine kleine stilistische Anmerkung:

We are sent to bring the gospel
to a dying world today,
to lift up the name of Jesus,
giving hope in despair.
We are marching on each day,
nothing can stop us now.
We resist the king of darkness,
reclaiming the earth for God.

And we proclaim
the name of Jesus.
We proclaim
His kingdom now.
We proclaim
the power of Jesus.
We proclaim His victory.

And if we fall, we will stand up.
We go on even if we are weak.
We are soldiers of the living God,
sent into a battle of life and death.

He is the living God.
He is the Lamb on the throne.
He is the Messiah.
He has paid the price for us.

Die einzige Anmerkung:

• "conquering back the earth for God" → "reclaiming the earth for God" – "conquering back" ist keine idiomatische englische Konstruktion; "reclaim" (zurückerobern/zurückholen) drückt genau diesen Gedanken aus und klingt natürlicher. Falls du das militärische Bild von "conquering" (erobern) unbedingt beibehalten möchtest, wäre auch "reconquering the earth for God" eine Option — beides ist möglich, "reclaiming" fließt beim Singen aber etwas leichter.

Ansonsten ist der Text grammatisch sauber, Großschreibung von "He/His" bei Gottesbezug war bereits durchgehend korrekt vorhanden.

I wish you a merrily Christmas

I wish you a merrily Christmas

I wish you a merrily christmas

and a good and happy new year

I hope you have

a wonderful christmas time

and that your wishes

become true

Too many people

think on christmas on gifts

which they want to buy

for all their friends

But I want to tell you

that Christmas is more

Than parcels under a tree

It wants to remind us

on the time

when God father has given us

his own son

who lived among us

and who has solved

the whole world

from condenation

Maybe you think

every year it s the same

everyone has good wishes

but in the end

Every year goes on

in the same ways

and every year is harder

than that before

But I want to tell you

that you need do worry

you don t have to deseperate

because there is hope for you

Cause Jesus will help you

to find a new way

that is the message

of the christmas time

Heal my Heart

Heal my heart o God you have promised to restore

Everything that has been destroyend

by the power of the darkness

Save my life o Lord

From the evel which is burden me

Keep my feet on the path of your glority

Sometime I have doubts about your goodness

When I see that my life is floating away in troubles

Sometimes i am wondering Why I do not see your works

But when I change my point of view

I can see the cross where you died for me

Sometimes life is so dark and i seems the night will never end

I think I have to live forever in sickness and desesperation

But you are the Lord of time who changes everything

you have promised it

you always give a new morning after every night

And now I enter in you presence fellowshiping with you lord

I lay all my burden to the footh of the cross

Receving your gift of healing and salvation

I am waiting paciently until your promise comes true

I belive in you

Letter of love

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

I want to write a letter of love
to You, my God, my Savior
but there are no words to express
what my heart is feeling for You

So I offer You a song
of thanksgiving to praise You
and You see my heart
longing for You

First of all, I give You thanks
that You redeemed my life from the dark
And all that I have failed at
is forgiven and forgotten
And thank You for my sanity
that You gave me Your healing
All that has burdened me
I will never mention again

And thank You for my friends
for every person that loves me
Sharing Your gifts with each other
makes us so happy

And thank You for this land
where You have brought me
to live in
I have received so many blessings here
and they treat me as one of them

And each day You are providing me
with everything that I need
Because I'm always in Your hand
and You will never leave me

But most of all I thank You
that You have created me
that You have given this life to me
just because You love me

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "you"/"your" → "You"/"Your" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "saviour" → "Savior" – 1) Großschreibung als Ehrentitel, 2) "saviour" ist die britische Schreibweise; da der übrige Text amerikanisches Englisch verwendet (z. B. "sanity", "burdened"), habe ich "Savior" (amerikanisch) gewählt. Falls du britisches Englisch bevorzugst, wäre "Saviour" ebenso korrekt.
• "all that I have failed" → "all that I have failed at" – "fail" braucht hier die Präposition "at" ("bei etwas versagen"), sonst wäre "failed" transitiv gemeint (etwas/jemanden im Stich lassen), was hier nicht der Sinn ist.
• "Sharing your gifts with each others" → "Sharing Your gifts with each other" – "each other" (nicht "each others" mit "s") ist die korrekte Form.
• "I have received so much blessings" → "I have received so many blessings" – "blessings" ist zählbar (Plural), daher "many" statt "much".
• "I m" → "I'm" – fehlender Apostroph.
• "you never will leave me" → "You will never leave me" – natürlichere Wortstellung im Englischen ("will never" statt "never will").

Wings of the morning

Wings of the morning
 

 

Hier ist der korrigierte Text (basierend auf Psalm 139):

If I took the wings of the morning
and flew to the shore farthest away
even there You are already, You lead me
and Your hand is holding me

Lord, You search me
Lord, You know me
Lord, You're holding me
You're my Creator
You're my Provider
You are the Shepherd of my life

If I rose to the heavens
You're already there
If I went down to Sheol
I could not hide from You

Now I have seen
that there's no point
in hiding from Your face
Everywhere I go
You are there
I can't flee from You

All of my days You know
Every second of my life
in darkness and light
At the end of space
You are finding me

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "I flow to the shore" → "flew to the shore" – "flow" (fließen) → "flew" (Präteritum von "fly", fliegen) – hier war ein Verb verwechselt worden.
• "most far away" → "farthest away" – für den Superlativ von "far" ist "farthest" die korrekte Form, nicht "most far".
• "Than you re already there" → "even there You are already" – 1) "Than" (als Vergleichswort) passt hier nicht, gemeint ist wohl "then" oder eher ein Ausdruck wie "even there" (selbst dort), passend zum biblischen Original (Psalm 139,9-10: "even there your hand will guide me"), 2) Apostroph und Großschreibung bei "You're" ergänzt.
• "you re" → "You're" (durchgehend) – fehlender Apostroph, Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "pastor" → "Shepherd" – "pastor" im Englischen bedeutet "Pfarrer/Geistlicher", nicht "Hirte"; das biblische Bild von Gott als Hirte (Psalm 23) heißt im Englischen "Shepherd".
• "If I arose to the heaven" → "If I rose to the heavens" – 1) "arose" ist die Präteritumform von "arise", aber nach "if" (hypothetisch) passt hier die einfache Form "rose" (von "rise") besser, 2) "the heavens" (Plural) ist die gebräuchlichere biblische Form.
• "If I went down to the sheol" → "If I went down to Sheol" – "Sheol" ist ein Eigenname und wird ohne Artikel geschrieben, großgeschrieben.
• "I could not hide me" → "I could not hide from You" – "hide me" ist grammatisch unvollständig; "hide from" ist die korrekte Präposition, "from You" ergänzt für den Sinn (Anspielung auf Psalm 139,7).
• "that there s no meaning / To hide away from your face" → "that there's no point / in hiding from Your face" – 1) Apostroph ergänzt, 2) "no meaning to hide" ist unidiomatisch; "no point in hiding" (es hat keinen Sinn, sich zu verstecken) ist die natürliche Formulierung, 3) Großschreibung bei "Your".
• "I can t fly from you" → "I can't flee from You" – 1) Apostroph ergänzt, 2) "fly from" (wegfliegen von) passt inhaltlich weniger gut als "flee from" (fliehen vor) – Anspielung auf Psalm 139,7 ("where shall I flee from your presence?").
• "All of my days you are knowing" → "All of my days You know" – "are knowing" ist grammatisch falsch ("know" ist ein Zustandsverb, das im Englischen keine Verlaufsform bildet); korrekt ist die einfache Form "You know".
• "In Darkness and light" → "in darkness and light" – Kleinschreibung (kein Satzanfang/Eigenname).
• "at the end of the space" → "At the end of space" – "space" (der Raum/das Weltall) wird hier ohne Artikel verwendet, wie im übertragenen, poetischen Sinn üblich.

Everything is serving for the good

Everything is serving for the good

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

In the night, when the day
is ending, I am thinking of You
Another day I have lived,
blessed by You, my Lord

And when I had
sad moments in this day
everything is working
together for my good

Everything works together for good
for those who love You
Everything works together for good
for those who love You

Sometimes I don't understand
the plans You have for me
Full of impatience
I am tired of waiting for You
But You say in Your word
that Your ways are good
And everything is working
together for my good

You are the rock
and I am built on You
In all circumstances
I am firm and protected by You
Even if sometimes
I meet affliction
everything is working
together for my good

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "you"/"your" → "You"/"Your" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug (wie in den vorherigen englischen Liedern konsequent gehandhabt).
• "blessed of you" → "blessed by You" – "blessed by" ist die korrekte Präposition ("gesegnet von dir"), nicht "blessed of".
• "Everything is serving for the good to me" → "everything is working together for my good" – Anspielung auf Römer 8,28 ("all things work together for good"); "is serving for the good to me" ist keine idiomatische Konstruktion. Ich habe konsequent die bekannte biblische Formulierung "everything works/is working together for good" verwendet.
• "Everything is serving to the good / For them who are loving you" → "Everything works together for good / for those who love You" – 1) wie oben die idiomatische Bibelformulierung, 2) "for those who love You" ist die gebräuchliche Wendung (statt "for them who are loving you").
• "the planes you have for me" → "the plans You have for me" – "planes" (Flugzeuge/Ebenen) → "plans" (Pläne), Tippfehler.
• "I don t understand" → "I don't understand" – fehlender Apostroph.
• "Even If sometimes" → "Even if sometimes" – Kleinschreibung von "if" (kein Satzanfang/Eigenname).

Kleiner Hinweis: Ich habe "everything is serving for the good to me" durchgehend zu "everything is working together for my good" bzw. in den Refrainzeilen zu "everything works together for good" vereinheitlicht, da beide Formulierungen im Original leicht unterschiedlich waren (mal "is serving", mal die Refrainform) – jetzt ist der Bezug zu Römer 8,28 klar und einheitlich. Falls du lieber näher am ursprünglichen Wortlaut "is serving for my good" bleiben möchtest (auch wenn es weniger idiomatisch ist), sag gerne Bescheid.

Is it me who crucified Jesus

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

When He touches me with His Spirit
my heart begins to cry
because I feel
what pain I caused Him with my sins

When I look to the cross I see
what I have done with my life
Disobeying and destroying
casting away His grace

Is it me who crucified Jesus
Is it me who put the nails in His hands
Is it me He was praying for on the cross
"Father, forgive them,
for they do not know what they're doing"

And the sin in my life was changing me
I did not know what I did
but this is no excuse
to refuse
the grace He wanted to give me

Now I am bowing my knees before Him
praying: Father, forgive me
Receiving the gift of His salvation
of His never-ending grace

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "he"/"his"/"him" → "He"/"His"/"Him" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug (wie in den vorherigen englischen Liedern konsequent gehandhabt).
• "my heart begins to cry / because I fell" → "my heart begins to cry / because I feel" – "fell" (Präteritum von "fall") ergibt hier keinen Sinn; gemeint ist vermutlich "feel" (ich fühle/spüre). Bitte prüfen, ob das deiner Absicht entspricht.
• "which pain I caused him" → "what pain I caused Him" – "which" passt hier grammatisch nicht; "what pain" (welchen Schmerz/was für einen Schmerz) ist die korrekte Konstruktion.
• "put the nails in his hand" → "put the nails in His hands" – Plural "hands" (es waren beide Hände), zudem Großschreibung.
• "Father forgive / they do not know what they re doing" → "Father, forgive them, / for they do not know what they're doing" – 1) Anspielung auf Lukas 23,34 – im englischen Bibeltext lautet es "Father, forgive them, for they know not what they do"; "forgive" braucht ein Objekt ("them"), 2) "for" ergänzt für den kausalen Zusammenhang, 3) Apostroph in "they're" ergänzt. In Anführungszeichen gesetzt, da es sich um ein wörtliches Zitat handelt.
• "was chaning me" → "was changing me" – Tippfehler.
• "Now I am boing my knees" → "Now I am bowing my knees" – Tippfehler ("boing" → "bowing").
• "Reciving" → "Receiving" – Tippfehler.
• "neverending" → "never-ending" – im Englischen wird dieses zusammengesetzte Adjektiv meist mit Bindestrich geschrieben.

⚠️ Bitte insbesondere die Zeile "because I feel" (ursprünglich "because I fell") noch einmal prüfen — falls du tatsächlich etwas anderes meintest (z. B. "because I failed" – weil ich versagt habe), sag gerne Bescheid, dann passe ich es entsprechend an.

I raise up in the Power of the Lord

I raise up in the power of the Lord  

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

I rise up in the power of the Lord
I lift my hands and my soul to Him
I give my heart and my mind
to my Redeemer
I rise up in the power of the Lord

Temptation, affliction
Lies of the devil
are surrounding me
I pray to Jesus
He sets me free
And with His Spirit
He's protecting me

Lying on the floor
crying a lot
because sin has won over me
I pray to Jesus
to purify me
and with His blood
He is cleansing me

Full of burden
no hope
because all seems
against me
I pray to Jesus
He carries my burden
and with Him
I will overcome

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "I raise up" → "I rise up" (mehrfach) – "raise" ist transitiv (etwas anheben, braucht ein Objekt), "rise" ist intransitiv (sich selbst erheben); da hier "ich erhebe mich" gemeint ist, ist "rise up" korrekt.
• "my hand" → "my hands" – Plural, da man normalerweise beide Hände hebt.
• "to my redeemer" → "to my Redeemer" – Großschreibung als Ehrentitel für Christus.
• "he"/"his"/"him" → "He"/"His"/"Him" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "Temtation, aflication" → "Temptation, affliction" – Rechtschreibfehler (fehlende Buchstaben).
• "are surounding me" → "are surrounding me" – Rechtschreibfehler (nur ein "r").
• "he s protecting me" → "He's protecting me" – Apostroph ergänzt, Großschreibung.
• "Laying on the floor" → "Lying on the floor" – "lay" (etwas hinlegen, transitiv) vs. "lie" (liegen, intransitiv); da hier eine Person selbst liegt, ist "lying" korrekt, nicht "laying".
• "he is cleaning me" → "He is cleansing me" – "cleanse" (reinigen/läutern, oft im geistlichen/biblischen Sinn) passt hier besser als "clean" (putzen/säubern im alltäglichen Sinn) – Anspielung auf 1. Johannes 1,7 ("the blood of Jesus... cleanses us from all sin").
• "He cares my burden" → "He carries my burden" – "cares" (kümmert sich um) passt grammatisch nicht in diese Konstruktion; "carries" (trägt) ist hier das richtige Verb — Anspielung auf 1. Petrus 5,7 / Psalm 55,22 ("cast your burden on the Lord").

Emptyblues

Hier ist die korrigierte Version:

Sometimes I Feel So Empty

Sometimes I feel so empty
My soul is thirsting for more
Sometimes I feel so empty
My soul is thirsting for more
Because all I loved and owned
Has gone away

But Jesus, You have promised me
To restore the things
Which were destroyed

Living water stills the thirst
Of my soul
Glorify Your name on high
Gives me strength, gives me power

Fellowshipping with my Lord
With worship, with prayer
In the morning when I awake
You are there to lead me
Through the day

Every trouble that I meet
You lead me through
In the evening
I go to bed
Giving thanks for the day
Resting in Your presence, Lord
Meeting You in my dreams

I will never fall away from You
You're the solid ground
That I stand on
Nothing lasts eternally
But You
You're the One
Who will never change

Thousands of years
You are the same
I know one moment
In Your house
Is the best in the universe

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Wichtigste Korrekturen:

• "strenght" → "strength"
• "Fellowshiping" → "Fellowshipping" (doppeltes p)
• "leasts enternaly" → "lasts eternally"
• "on highs" → "on high" (feste Redewendung "glorify your name on high")
• "You re" → "You're" (Apostroph)
• "Never fall away from you" → "I will never fall away from You" (vollständiger Satz, da es sonst wie ein Imperativ klingt)
• "is the best in universe" → "is the best in the universe" (Artikel ergänzt)
• "which are destroyed" → "which were destroyed" (Zeitform passend zu "have promised... to restore")
• Groß-/Kleinschreibung von "You/Your" vereinheitlicht (Bezug auf Gott), wie schon beim vorherigen Lied
• Kommata ergänzt (z.B. "Jesus, You", "Resting in Your presence, Lord")

Auch hier gilt: Falls du "you/your" lieber durchgehend klein haben möchtest, sag Bescheid.

Jesus has changed my life

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
I give Him glory

Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
I give Him praise

Once I was a sinner
but I was unaware
I just was out for fun
to comfort me at night

But the fun of the night
was followed by emptiness
And I felt hunger for more life

Once I was a sinner
but I was unaware
When I hurt the people
that surrounded me

Being hurt myself
made me unrighteous
until that day
that Jesus saved me

Once I was a sinner
and now I am aware
that Jesus is the One
who gives me joy and life

And His blessing each day
gives healing to each suffering
His Spirit and love
comfort me

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "him" → "Him" (mehrfach) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "emptyness" → "emptiness" – Rechtschreibfehler.
• "Being hurted myself" → "Being hurt myself" – "hurt" ist ein unregelmäßiges Verb (hurt–hurt–hurt), "hurted" ist keine korrekte Form.
• "made me unrightousness" → "made me unrighteous" – 1) Tippfehler, 2) nach "made me" braucht es das Adjektiv "unrighteous" (ungerecht/sündig), nicht das Substantiv "unrighteousness".
• "Jesus is the one" → "Jesus is the One" – Großschreibung als Ehrentitel/Gottesbezug.
• "his blessing" → "His blessing", "his spirit" → "His Spirit" – Großschreibung (bei "Spirit" zusätzlich als Bezug auf den Heiligen Geist).
• "give healing to each suffer" → "gives healing to each suffering" – 1) "give" → "gives" (3. Person Singular, da Subjekt "blessing" ist), 2) "suffer" (Verb, "leiden") passt hier nicht als Substantiv; gemeint ist wahrscheinlich "suffering" (das Leiden/die Leidenden). Falls du "each one who suffers" meintest, wäre das eine noch klarere Alternative — sag Bescheid, falls gewünscht.

We are like grass on the field (somos como el pasto en el campo)

In this life we are doing a lot

We are busy with many things

How important is to think on God

Because the day of death is coming near

We are like grass on the field

Today we are in flowers but tomorrow we re dieing

How good is it to have a home eternal

A home forever with God

God you word is eternal

Your commandments are good

Everything is changing here in the world

But you are the same forever

There is only one way

To heaven to eternal life

Christ on the cruz who has raised again

The life the truth the way

Original text in Spanish 

En este mundo hacemos mucho

Estamos ocupados con cosas

Que importante es de pensar en Dios

Porque el dia de la muerte se acerca

Somos como el pasto en el campo

Hoy florecemos y mañana morimos

Que bueno es tener un hogar eternal

Un hogar para siempre con Dios

Dios tu palabra es eternal

Tus mandamientos son buenos

Todo se cambia en el mundo aquí

Pero tu eres lo mismo para siempre

Hay solamente un camino

Al cielo a la vida enternal

Cristo en la cruz que ressusito

La vida la verdad el camino 

Loving God

You stood on the field and you preached to the people

But only a few understood

The words you were speaking how God wants the world

To be and how life here is

You said that the simple and poor are bless that sadness will end

You said it is better to love than to hate

To forgive the unrighousness

Loving god with your heart and your soul

And your next as yourselv

Makes you inherit the kingdom of God

Loving God with your life with your all

And your next as yourself

Makes you see the face of God and feel his loving care

You said we shall love even those who hate us

Bless those who are cursing us

Forgive them who cause us suffer and pain to break the chaines of hate

You said that the thoughts are leading to sin that evil comes out of heart

Jesus I beg you please purify me to live in the kingdom of God

Jesus I see that you know what I feel when I suffer even I love

You hang on the cross tortured and pained and you prayed father forgive

Let me learn from your words and your life the rules of the kingdom of God

Loving with love so divine and so pure

My God and my next and myself 

It s a good way

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

Standing in Your presence makes me believe
You're the Creator of the universe who is leading everything
And full of love You take care of me, You see where I am
You're reaching out Your loving hand, You guide my way

And it's a good way You have for me, when the night falls
You light up a light for me so I'll never get lost
It's a narrow way You are leading me on, sometimes it's difficult to see
I see only a bit of it, but it's prepared for all my days

And all the things I worry about become so unimportant
when I put my hand in Yours and stop being frightened
I long for more love and confidence in my Father in heaven
who takes care of all my needs long before I pray

After all, will the One who created me, who gives life and gifts to me,
will the Lord who owns me not take care of His child?
We are sheep in the Shepherd's hand, we just go where He leads us
Through valleys and mountains, rivers of flowing water

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "your"/"you"/"his" → "Your"/"You"/"His" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "You re" → "You're", "I m" → "I'm", "it s" → "it's" (durchgehend) – fehlende Apostrophe.
• "creator of universe" → "Creator of the universe" – 1) Großschreibung als Ehrentitel, 2) fehlender Artikel "the".
• "you take care on me" → "You take care of me" – "take care of" ist die korrekte Präposition, nicht "on".
• "You re reaching your loving hand" → "You're reaching out Your loving hand" – "reach out" (die Hand ausstrecken) ist die idiomatische Konstruktion; "reach your hand" allein klingt unvollständig.
• "when the night falls down" → "when the night falls" – "fall down" ist im übertragenen Sinn (die Nacht bricht herein) unüblich; "falls" allein reicht.
• "so I never will get lost" → "so I'll never get lost" – natürlichere Wortstellung ("I'll never" statt "I never will"), Apostroph ergänzt.
• "It s a small way you are leading me" → "It's a narrow way You are leading me on" – 1) "small" → "narrow" (Anspielung auf Matthäus 7,14: "narrow is the way"), 2) "leading me" braucht im Englischen meist "on" oder eine Ergänzung für den Sinn "auf einem Weg führen".
• "I see only a bit of it but it s prepared" → "I see only a bit of it, but it's prepared" – Komma und Apostroph ergänzt.
• "topics I worry about" → "things I worry about" – "topics" (Themen, eher akademisch/formal) passt weniger gut als "things" (Dinge, die einen beschäftigen) in diesem persönlichen Kontext.
• "stop to be frightened" → "and stop being frightened" – 1) "stop to be" ist grammatisch falsch (würde bedeuten "anhalten, um ängstlich zu sein"); "stop being" (aufhören, ängstlich zu sein) ist korrekt, 2) "and" ergänzt zur Satzverbindung.
• "confidence to my father" → "confidence in my Father" – "confidence in" ist die korrekte Präposition, nicht "to"; Großschreibung bei "Father".
• "before I m praying" → "before I pray" – die Verlaufsform passt hier nicht so gut wie die einfache Form "I pray".
• "At least I ask who has created me gives life and gifts to me / Shall the Lord who is owning me not take care of his child" → "After all, will the One who created me, who gives life and gifts to me, / will the Lord who owns me not take care of His child?" – der Originalsatz war grammatisch sehr unklar (vermutlich eine wörtliche Übersetzung aus dem Deutschen "Zumindest frage ich, der mich geschaffen hat..."); ich habe daraus eine rhetorische Frage im Englischen gemacht, die dem vermuteten Sinn entspricht: "Wird nicht derjenige, der mich geschaffen hat und mir Leben und Gaben gibt – wird der Herr, dem ich gehöre, nicht für sein Kind sorgen?" Bitte prüfen, ob das deiner Absicht entspricht – falls du etwas anderes meintest, sag gerne Bescheid.
• "We are sheep in the shepherds hand" → "We are sheep in the Shepherd's hand" – fehlender Apostroph (Genitiv), Großschreibung als Bild für Christus.
• "Valleys and mountains Rivers of streaming water" → "Through valleys and mountains, rivers of flowing water" – 1) "through" ergänzt für einen vollständigen Satzanschluss, 2) Komma ergänzt, 3) "streaming water" → "flowing water" (natürlicher im Bild von Flüssen).

⚠️ Besonders die Zeile "At least I ask who has created me..." war stark unklar formuliert — bitte kontrolliere meine Interpretation, da ich hier eine größere inhaltliche Annahme treffen musste.

There is no more love

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

There is no greater love in this world
than the love of the One who gave His life for His friends
There is no greater love in this world
than the love of the One who suffered for me

And His name is Jesus, who loves us all
His name is Jesus, who gives mercy and grace
He is worthy that I give Him thanks
Bowing my knees before Him

He has touched me deep in my heart
and now I sing with joy for Him
Come and celebrate with me the name of Jesus
Let us rejoice in Him because there is so much reason

He has restored my life from sickness and darkness

He has transformed my crying into a song of joy

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "no more love...Than" → "no greater love...than" – "no more love than" ist grammatisch zwar möglich, aber "no greater love" ist die idiomatische, bekannte Formulierung (Anspielung auf Johannes 15,13: "Greater love has no one than this..."); zudem Kleinschreibung von "than" (kein Satzanfang).
• "his life for his friends" → "His life for His friends" – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug (Jesus).
• "the one who" → "the One who" (mehrfach) – Großschreibung als Bezugstitel auf Christus.
• "his name is Jesus who has love for us all" → "His name is Jesus, who loves us all" – 1) Komma vor dem Relativsatz ergänzt, 2) "has love for" → "loves" ist die natürlichere, direktere Formulierung.
• "His name is Jesus who gives" → "His name is Jesus, who gives" – Komma ergänzt.
• "give him thanks" → "give Him thanks", "before him" → "before Him" – Großschreibung.
• "I sing of joy for him" → "I sing with joy for Him" – "sing with joy" (mit Freude singen) ist idiomatischer als "sing of joy" (was eher "von der Freude singen" bedeuten würde); Großschreibung bei "Him".
• "rejoice in him" → "rejoice in Him" – Großschreibung.
• "transformed my crying in a song of joy" → "transformed my crying into a song of joy" – "transform into" ist die korrekte Präposition, nicht "transform in".

The Prodigal

Hier ist der korrigierte Text (basierend auf dem Gleichnis vom verlorenen Sohn, Lukas 15):

I'm coming home to You, my Father
I am the prodigal, please forgive me
I'm coming home
but I am not worthy
to be Your child, let me be Your servant

A father's heart filled with love
that forgives me even if I don't deserve it
God's heart is like a father's heart
He is longing for me to come home

I did not want to obey You, Father
I did not want to see
that Your thoughts were love
and You gave me all Your gifts and blessings
I did not want to see the tears in Your eyes

Away from You, life seemed so easy
Each day I did what I chose to do
But my friends were only there for me
when my money was there
When it was gone
they left me too

Then I stood alone, everything lost
and I had to work as a servant
I had to eat the food of pigs, remembering how good You are
And I went home not feeling worthy
to be in Your house even as a servant
But You were waiting there for me to come

And You are calling me: my son

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "you"/"your" → "You"/"Your" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "I m" → "I'm" (mehrfach) – fehlender Apostroph.
• "even if I don t deserve" → "even if I don't deserve it" – 1) Apostroph ergänzt, 2) "deserve" braucht ein Objekt ("it" ergänzt).
• "A fathers heart" → "A father's heart" – fehlender Apostroph (Genitiv).
• "Gods heart is like a fathers heart" → "God's heart is like a father's heart" – fehlende Apostrophe.
• "longing for me to coming home" → "longing for me to come home" – nach "to" folgt der Infinitiv ("come"), nicht die -ing-Form.
• "Each day I did what I choosed to do" → "Each day I did what I chose to do" – "choosed" ist keine korrekte Form von "choose" (unregelmäßiges Verb: choose–chose–chosen).
• "But my friends were just approaching me / When my money was gone / They left me too" → "But my friends were only there for me / when my money was there / When it was gone / they left me too" – der Originaltext war inhaltlich widersprüchlich ("meine Freunde kamen nur zu mir, als mein Geld weg war" – das ergibt keinen Sinn). Ich habe es so umformuliert, dass klar wird: die Freunde waren nur da, solange das Geld da war, und gingen, als es alle war. Bitte prüfe, ob das deiner ursprünglichen Absicht entspricht – falls du etwas anderes meintest, sag gerne Bescheid.
• "I had to eat food of pigs" → "I had to eat the food of pigs" – Artikel "the" ergänzt für einen natürlicheren Satzfluss.
• "To be in your house as a servant" → "to be in Your house even as a servant" – "even" ergänzt, um den Sinn des Originaltextes zu verdeutlichen (er hält sich nicht einmal für würdig, ein Diener zu sein). Falls "even" nicht gewünscht ist, kann es auch weggelassen werden.

⚠️ Bitte insbesondere die dritte Strophe ("But my friends were just approaching me...") noch einmal prüfen – dort war die ursprüngliche Aussage unklar, und ich musste eine Interpretation treffen, um den Satz grammatisch und inhaltlich stimmig zu machen.Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

I'm coming home to You, my Father
I am the prodigal, please forgive me
I'm coming home
but I am not worthy
to be Your child, let me be Your servant

A father's heart filled with love
that forgives me even if I don't deserve it
God's heart is like a father's heart
He is longing for me to come home

I did not want to obey You, Father
I did not want to see
that Your thoughts were love
and You gave me all Your gifts and blessings
I did not want to see the tears in Your eyes

Away from You, life seemed so easy
Each day I did what I chose to do
But my friends were only there for me
while my money lasted
When it was gone
they left me too

Then I stood alone, everything lost
and I had to work as a servant
I had to eat the food of pigs, remembering how good You are
And I went home not feeling worthy
to be in Your house even as a servant
But You were waiting there for me to come

And You are calling me: my son

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "you"/"your" → "You"/"Your" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
• "I m" → "I'm" (mehrfach) – fehlender Apostroph.
• "even if I don t deserve" → "even if I don't deserve it" – Apostroph ergänzt, "deserve" braucht ein Objekt.
• "A fathers heart" → "A father's heart", "Gods heart...a fathers heart" → "God's heart...a father's heart" – fehlende Apostrophe (Genitiv).
• "longing for me to coming home" → "longing for me to come home" – nach "to" folgt der Infinitiv, nicht die -ing-Form.
• "I choosed" → "I chose" – "choosed" ist keine korrekte Form von "choose" (choose–chose–chosen).
• "my friends were just approaching me / When my money was gone / They left me too" → "my friends were only there for me / while my money lasted / When it was gone / they left me too" – der Originalsatz war inhaltlich widersprüchlich; ich habe ergänzt, dass die Freunde nur da waren, solange das Geld reichte. Bitte prüfen, ob das deiner Absicht entspricht.
• "eat food of pigs" → "eat the food of pigs" – Artikel ergänzt.
• "To be in your house as a servant" → "to be in Your house even as a servant" – "even" ergänzt, um den Sinn zu verdeutlichen (er hält sich nicht einmal für würdig, Diener zu sein); kann bei Bedarf weggelassen werden.

You left (tu dejaste)

You left your glory to live as a human

You live among us to show us the father

You talked about the kingdom of God of his love

You were the light in a very dark time

Jesus son of God

Jesus son of God

You gave your life on the cross for to pay

My doubts and sins you took on the cross my place

You suffered pains left of your father

You felt the nails the crown of hawthorns

Jesus my redeemer

Jesus my redeemer

You left the grave you overcame the death

To give life to all who believe in you

You will return on the end of time

In you we have eternal life

Jesus the life

Jesus the life

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Tu dejaste la gloria para vivir como humano

Viviste  con nosotros para enseñarnos el padre

Hablaste del reino de Dios de su amor

Fuiste la luz en un tiempo muy oscuro

Jesus hijo de Dios

Jesus hijo de Dios

Tu dejaste tu vida en la cruz para pagar

Mi culpa y pecado tomaste en la cruz mi lugar

Sufriste dolores desamparrado de tu padre

Sentiste los clavos con una corona de espinos

Jesus mi redentor

Jesus mi redentor

Tu dejaste la tumba venciste la muerte

Para dar la vida a ellos que creen en ti

Vas a volver al fin del tiempo

En ti tenemos vida enterna

Jesus la vida

Jesus la vida

I want to love you more Jesus (Quiero amarte mas Jesus)

When I put my hand in your hand
When I see your loving face

When I feel your heart near me
I praise you

When nothing else matters, being in your presence

Which testifies that you love me
I praise youI want to love you more, Jesus, not only to know you

I want to love you more, Jesus, not only because you bless me

 I want to love you because you are the friend of my life
I am hungry for you
I give thanks to you
Because you loved me before

When I look at the stars in a dark night
I am thinking of you
And I praise you

When I feel your presence and I'm falling in your arms
Which are a refuge for me
I praise you

Jesus, Lamb of God, faithful and gentle
You are the passion of my life

I love you Lord

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Cuando pongo mi mano en tu mano 

Cuando veo tu cara amada 

Cuando siento tu corazcon cerca de mi 

Te adoro 

Cuando nada mas importa 

Estando en tu presencia

Que testiga que tu me amas 

Te adoro 

Quiero amarte mas Jesus, no solo conocerte 

Quiero amarte mas Jesus, no solo por tus bendiciones 

Quiero amarte porque tu eres tu, el amigo de mi vida 

Tengo hambre de ti 

Te doy gracias señor 

Porque tu amaste al principio a mi 

Cuando veo las estrellas 

en una noche oscura 

yo pienso en ti 

y te adoro 

Cuando siento tu presencia 

y estoy cayendo en tus manos 

que son refugio para mi 

te adoro 

Quiero amarte mas....

Jesus, cordero de Dios fiel y tierno 

La passion de mi vida eres tu 

Te amo señor 

Quiero amarte mas, Jesus... 

Nothing seperates us (Nada nos separa)

 

 

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

Nothing separates us from the love of God
No height, no depth, no darkness
Like a father leading his child with love
All He does is good

He gives us peace, not as the world gives it
Your heart should not tremble
We have no fear because He is with us
He gives peace and rest when it's storming

He gives us His grace even though we don't deserve it
His grace without condition
I say joyfully: I am forgiven
There is no condemnation for me

His anger is slow and His grace is great
Each day we breathe here
It's time to repent

Receive Christ and life

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "No highs no depth no darkness" → "No height, no depth, no darkness" – 1) Anspielung auf Römer 8,39 ("neither height nor depth"), 2) "highs" (Plural, umgangssprachlich für "Höhepunkte") → "height" (die Höhe, als Gegenstück zu "depth"), 3) Kommas zur besseren Lesbarkeit ergänzt.
• "He gives us peace not the earth" → "He gives us peace, not as the world gives it" – Anspielung auf Johannes 14,27 ("Peace I leave with you... not as the world gives"); "not the earth" ergibt so keinen Sinn, "not as the world gives it" ist die korrekte, bekannte biblische Formulierung.
• "We don t have fear" → "We have no fear" – 1) Apostroph ergänzt, 2) "have no fear" ist idiomatischer als "don't have fear".
• "when It s storming" → "when it's storming" – Kleinschreibung von "it" (kein Satzanfang/Eigenname), Apostroph ergänzt.
• "even we don t deserve it" → "even though we don't deserve it" – "even" allein reicht hier nicht als Konjunktion; "even though" (obwohl) ist die korrekte Form; Apostroph ergänzt.
• "I am saying joyful I am forgiven" → "I say joyfully: I am forgiven" – 1) "joyful" (Adjektiv) → "joyfully" (Adverb, beschreibt "sagen"), 2) Doppelpunkt für die wörtliche Aussage ergänzt.
• "His anger is slowly" → "His anger is slow" – "slowly" (Adverb) passt hier nicht; nach "is" (Verbindungsverb) braucht es das Adjektiv "slow".
• "we respire" → "we breathe" – "respire" ist ein sehr formal-medizinischer Begriff; "breathe" ist im allgemeinen/poetischen Kontext das natürlichere Wort.
• "repend ourselves" → "repent" – 1) "repend" ist kein englisches Wort (Tippfehler für "repent"), 2) "repent" ist im Englischen nicht reflexiv, man sagt nicht "repent ourselves".

⚠️ Kleiner Hinweis: Die letzte Zeile deines Textes endete mit "It's time to repend ourselves" – im entsprechenden spanischen Original (das du früher eingereicht hattest) gab es noch eine zusätzliche Zeile "Recibir a Cristo y la vida" (Christus und das Leben empfangen). Ich habe sie als "Receive Christ and life" ergänzt, falls sie im Englischen versehentlich fehlte – falls das nicht gewünscht ist, kannst du diese letzte Zeile einfach weglassen.

Receive Christ and the life

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Nada nos separa del amor de Dios

Ni altos ni profundos ni tinieblas

Como un padre dirige a su hijo con amor

Todos sus hechos son buenos

El nos da su paz no como el mundo

No se turbe nuestro corazcon

No tenemos miedo el esta con nosotros

Su paz da calma en tornamientos

El nos da su gracia también cuando no merezco

Su gracia sin condición

Yo digo alegre perdonado soy

No hay para mi condenación

Su ira es lento y su gracia mucho

Cada dia respiramos aquí

Es tiempo para arrepentirse

Recibir a Cristo y la vida 

The wind in my hair (El viento en mi pelo)

Jesus I miss you sometimes so much

My heart is hungry for you

Come with your spirit

Fill me communicate with me

You are like the wind in my hair

The living water for my thirst

You are the light that shines in me

You are the love of my life

Touched by you who loves me so much

You are my heavenly bridergoom

Come with your spirit

Love me

Join with me

I love you Christ I want to know you more

I want to sing thousands songs of love

Come with your spirit

Kiss me

When I am praising you 

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Jesus te extraño de veces tanto 

Mi corazcon tiene hambre de ti 

ven con tu espiritu

Llename comunicarte conmigo 

Eres como el viento en mi pelo

El agua viviente que calma mi sed

Eres la luz que brilla por mi 

El amor de mi vida eres tu

Tocado de ti que me ama tan bien

Tu eres mi novio celestal 

Ven con tu espiritu

Amame

Unirte conmigo

Te amo Cristo quiero conocerte mas

Quiero cantar mil canciones de amor

Ven con tu espiritu

Besame

en la adoracion a ti 

I have joy in you (me gozare en ti)

I have joy in You,

even in times I don't like.

I have joy in You,

and I give thanks to You.

I have joy in You

when the wind blows against me.

I have joy in You

because that is Your will for me.

It is easy to have joy on a sunny day

when everything is blessed by You.

But when we are in trouble,

we have to rely on You

and not lose our peace and joy.

Endless prayer to You in heaven

gives us strength to endure our troubles.

Your Spirit helps me to see the way.

Your Word is a light for me.

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Me gozare en ti

Tambien en tiempos que no me gustan

Me gozare en ti

Y te doy gracias señor

Me  gozare en ti

Cuando el viento es contra mi

Y te doy gracias señor

Porque es tu voluntad para mi

Es  facil de gozarse en un dia con sol

Cuando todo es bendecido por ti

Tambien en pruebas hay que confiar en ti

No pedir la paz y la alegria

Orar a ti sin para

Me da fuerza de vencer tisteza

Tu espiritu me consuele

Tu palabra es luz para mi 

God how great are your wonders (Dios que grande son tus maravillos)

God how great are your wonders

Your creation is talking of you

You created heaven and earth

And you re thinking of me too

God we praise you

God we worship you

Angels singing day and night

The glory of your majesty

I want to join in this choir

And sing to the King  in his holyness

God we praise you

God we worship you

God your greatness is never ending

And you love and your grace for me

You have opened a way so graceful

That I can communicate with you

God we praise you

God we worship you 

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Dios que grande son tus maravillos

Tu creación habla de ti

Has creado cielo y tierra

Pero Tambien tu piensas en mi

Dios te adoramos

Dios te alabamos

Angeles cantan dia y noche

La gloria de tu majestad

Quiero juntarme a este choro

Y cantar al rey en su santidad

Dios te adoramos

Dios te alabamos

Dios tu grandeza es infininto

Y tu amor y tu gracia por mi

Ha habrido un camino

De comunión entre tu y mi

Dios te adoramos

Dios te alabamos 

High as the mountains (Alto como las montañas)

 

 

 

High as the mountains is your grace about me

Deep as the ocean is the love you re showing me

You have saved me from the death you have given me eternal life

You paid the price for me

I am free and I m living for you

In your hands I living safetly in your arm I don t fear

You have given me your proteccion

I am blessed and I live for you

And in times of troubles you grace will never end

You show me that you love me

I am loved and I live for you 

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Alto como las montañas es tu gracia sobre mi

Profundo como el mar es el amor tu muestras a mi

Me has salvado de la muerte me has dado vida eternal

Pagaste el precio para mi

Yo soy libre y vivo por ti

En tus manos vivo seguro en tus brazos no tengo temor

Me has dado tu protección

Soy bendecida y vivo por ti

Y vienen de veces pruebas tu gracia no terminara

Me enseñas que tu me amas

Soy amada y vivo por ti 

God help me to understand (Dios ayudame a entender)

Gerne. Ich würde das Englisch etwas natürlicher und zugleich poetisch und gut singbar formulieren, ohne die ursprüngliche Aussage zu verändern.

God, help me to understand
that Your time is not mine.

Give me patience
to wait in silence
for Your answer.

Give me greater faith
when my soul is suffering.

Sometimes You seem to come late,
but You always come
with a purpose and a solution.

When I cry out, when I pray,
it seems that You are not listening.

But You are working in silence.
You have already prepared
the day of tomorrow.

I have to pray,
I have to trust
in the Lord who created the world.

He watches over me every day,
and He has already prepared
the day of tomorrow.

You say in Your Word
that when I cry out to You,
You will give me an answer.

You know better
what is good for me.

You have prepared for me
a tomorrow,
a future in Your hands.

God is hearing your praying (Dios escucha tu adoracion)

God hears your prayers
He always gives you an answer

Even though you must sometimes waitHe arrives in His time

Don't despair in difficult times

He has a way

 

He is greater than your problems

He is solving everything

Give Him thanks, even for the bad things

It works out for your good

After the rain comes the sun

Always in His time

When you're crying, you need faith

You're never suffering alone

He is faithful every day

Holding onto His promise

I lift up my eyes to the mountains (alzare mis ojos a los montes)

 

 

 

I lift up my eyes to the mountains
Where does my help come from?
My help comes from God,
who created heaven and earth.

He moves his hands when I pray.
I am quiet; he is fighting for me.
He guards me every day like a sheep.
He leads me and protects me; he is the good shepherd.

I will always praise him,
I will always pray
to my great God,
my help, my strength.

Original text in Spanish: 

Alzare mis ojos a los montes

De donde vendra mi socorro

Mi socorro viene de Dios

Que ha creado cielo y tierra

El mueve sus manos

Cuando yo oro

Yo soy tranquila

El lucha para mi

El me cuida cada dia

Como un oveja

El me guía y protege

El es el buen pastor

Siempre yo voy alabar

Siempre voy a adorar

Mi Dios grande

Mi socorro mi fuerza

Who is as great as the Lord (Quien es tan grande como Dios)

Who is as great as the Lord, The Creator of heaven and earth

He's reigning in majesty in heaven But he doesn't forget about me

My Creator, my life, my Father My Creator, my life, my Father

The fool says in his heart there is no God, even though His creation speaks of Him

The fool satisfies his soul in the world, not thinking that everything ends

But nothing satisfies the thirst of the soul

Like the presence of God Like the presence of God

I am feeling safe because God loves me, because He's guarding every day of my life

And all He expects of me is that I give thanks to Him

It is joy to praise the Lord with my soul

Feeling His presence Feeling His presence

I will never forget that God allows me to live

That He saved me from the valley of death, put my foot on the rock

I will praise the King in heaven

Searching His presence Searching His presence

Originaltext in Spanish: 

Quien es tan grande como Dios

El creador del cielo y tierra

El reino en majestad en el cielo

Pero no se olvida de mi

Mi creador mi vida mi padre

Mi creador mi vida mi padre

El necio dice en su corazón no hay dios Aun que toda creatura habla de el

El necio satisfecha su alma en la tierra no piensa que todo terminara

 Pero nada mas calma la sed de la alma

Como la presencia de Dios

Como la presencia de Dios

Me siento seguro porque Dios me ama Porque el cuida todo los días mi vida

Y todo el espera de mi  Es que yo le doy las gracias

Es un gozo de alabar el señor con su alma

Sentir su presencia

Sentir su presencia

Nunca yo voy a olvidar Que es Dios que me permite de vivir

Que me salvo de la valle de muerte puso mi pie en la roca

Voy a alabar el rey del cielo

Buscar su presencia

Buscar su presencia