Emptyblues

Hier ist die korrigierte Version:

Sometimes I Feel So Empty

Sometimes I feel so empty
My soul is thirsting for more
Sometimes I feel so empty
My soul is thirsting for more
Because all I loved and owned
Has gone away

But Jesus, You have promised me
To restore the things
Which were destroyed

Living water stills the thirst
Of my soul
Glorify Your name on high
Gives me strength, gives me power

Fellowshipping with my Lord
With worship, with prayer
In the morning when I awake
You are there to lead me
Through the day

Every trouble that I meet
You lead me through
In the evening
I go to bed
Giving thanks for the day
Resting in Your presence, Lord
Meeting You in my dreams

I will never fall away from You
You're the solid ground
That I stand on
Nothing lasts eternally
But You
You're the One
Who will never change

Thousands of years
You are the same
I know one moment
In Your house
Is the best in the universe

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Wichtigste Korrekturen:

• "strenght" → "strength"
• "Fellowshiping" → "Fellowshipping" (doppeltes p)
• "leasts enternaly" → "lasts eternally"
• "on highs" → "on high" (feste Redewendung "glorify your name on high")
• "You re" → "You're" (Apostroph)
• "Never fall away from you" → "I will never fall away from You" (vollständiger Satz, da es sonst wie ein Imperativ klingt)
• "is the best in universe" → "is the best in the universe" (Artikel ergänzt)
• "which are destroyed" → "which were destroyed" (Zeitform passend zu "have promised... to restore")
• Groß-/Kleinschreibung von "You/Your" vereinheitlicht (Bezug auf Gott), wie schon beim vorherigen Lied
• Kommata ergänzt (z.B. "Jesus, You", "Resting in Your presence, Lord")

Auch hier gilt: Falls du "you/your" lieber durchgehend klein haben möchtest, sag Bescheid.