There is no more love

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

There is no greater love in this world
than the love of the One who gave His life for His friends
There is no greater love in this world
than the love of the One who suffered for me

And His name is Jesus, who loves us all
His name is Jesus, who gives mercy and grace
He is worthy that I give Him thanks
Bowing my knees before Him

He has touched me deep in my heart
and now I sing with joy for Him
Come and celebrate with me the name of Jesus
Let us rejoice in Him because there is so much reason

He has restored my life from sickness and darkness

He has transformed my crying into a song of joy

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "no more love...Than" → "no greater love...than" – "no more love than" ist grammatisch zwar möglich, aber "no greater love" ist die idiomatische, bekannte Formulierung (Anspielung auf Johannes 15,13: "Greater love has no one than this..."); zudem Kleinschreibung von "than" (kein Satzanfang).
• "his life for his friends" → "His life for His friends" – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug (Jesus).
• "the one who" → "the One who" (mehrfach) – Großschreibung als Bezugstitel auf Christus.
• "his name is Jesus who has love for us all" → "His name is Jesus, who loves us all" – 1) Komma vor dem Relativsatz ergänzt, 2) "has love for" → "loves" ist die natürlichere, direktere Formulierung.
• "His name is Jesus who gives" → "His name is Jesus, who gives" – Komma ergänzt.
• "give him thanks" → "give Him thanks", "before him" → "before Him" – Großschreibung.
• "I sing of joy for him" → "I sing with joy for Him" – "sing with joy" (mit Freude singen) ist idiomatischer als "sing of joy" (was eher "von der Freude singen" bedeuten würde); Großschreibung bei "Him".
• "rejoice in him" → "rejoice in Him" – Großschreibung.
• "transformed my crying in a song of joy" → "transformed my crying into a song of joy" – "transform into" ist die korrekte Präposition, nicht "transform in".