Hier ist der korrigierte Text:
Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
I give Him glory
Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
Jesus has changed my life
I give Him praise
Once I was a sinner
but I was unaware
I just was out for fun
to comfort me at night
But the fun of the night
was followed by emptiness
And I felt hunger for more life
Once I was a sinner
but I was unaware
When I hurt the people
that surrounded me
Being hurt myself
made me unrighteous
until that day
that Jesus saved me
Once I was a sinner
and now I am aware
that Jesus is the One
who gives me joy and life
And His blessing each day
gives healing to each suffering
His Spirit and love
comfort me
Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:
- "him" → "Him" (mehrfach) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug.
- "emptyness" → "emptiness" – Rechtschreibfehler.
- "Being hurted myself" → "Being hurt myself" – "hurt" ist ein unregelmäßiges Verb (hurt–hurt–hurt), "hurted" ist keine korrekte Form.
- "made me unrightousness" → "made me unrighteous" – 1) Tippfehler, 2) nach "made me" braucht es das Adjektiv "unrighteous" (ungerecht/sündig), nicht das Substantiv "unrighteousness".
- "Jesus is the one" → "Jesus is the One" – Großschreibung als Ehrentitel/Gottesbezug.
- "his blessing" → "His blessing", "his spirit" → "His Spirit" – Großschreibung (bei "Spirit" zusätzlich als Bezug auf den Heiligen Geist).
- "give healing to each suffer" → "gives healing to each suffering" – 1) "give" → "gives" (3. Person Singular, da Subjekt "blessing" ist), 2) "suffer" (Verb, "leiden") passt hier nicht als Substantiv; gemeint ist wahrscheinlich "suffering" (das Leiden/die Leidenden). Falls du "each one who suffers" meintest, wäre das eine noch klarere Alternative — sag Bescheid, falls gewünscht.
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