Hier ist die korrigierte Version:
When the hope of your life disappears
When the hope of your life disappears
When you lose everything that was important to you
When the pain climbs over the joy
When the night surrounds you and you feel fear
He has a promise for you:
You will not lack anything
Even if the night of death reigns
You will not lack anything
Even if the enemies are laughing
And the shadows fall
He holds you in His hand
He is with you
There's nothing you lack
And you think these are all empty words
For where is God who loves you when despair controls you
And you ask about God's goodness
When in the valley of darkness you can't see anymore
Just believe, He said:
Maybe He doesn't give you what you want
But His table is set, He just wants you to come
Turn your gaze today
From all that scares you
To the One who gives hope
And be certain:
Wichtigste Korrekturen:
- "night surrounds and you feeling fear" → "night surrounds you and you feel fear" (Verb korrigiert)
- "shaddows" → "shadows"
- "There s nothing" → "There's nothing"
- Großschreibung von "He/His/Him" vereinheitlicht (üblich bei religiösen Liedtexten, wenn auf Gott verwiesen wird)
- "of all that scares you" → "From all that scares you" (Präposition passt besser zur Bedeutung "weg von")
- Doppelte Leerzeichen entfernt, Zeilenumbrüche und Kommata leicht angepasst für den Lesefluss
Falls du "He/His" lieber kleingeschrieben haben möchtest (moderner, weniger liturgischer Stil), sag Bescheid, dann ändere ich das durchgehend zurück.
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