Teach me (Enseñame)

 

Hier ist der korrigierte Text:

Many times I don't understand the meaning of my path
I often wonder why I live here
Many things I did not do well in my life
But You tell me that everything has its purpose for You

Teach me to see life with Your eyes
Teach me the laws of Your kingdom
Teach me to love like You loved
Teach me to live with You, Lord

Father, You give me bread and not stone
But when I don't ask, I don't receive anything
I'm going to start asking with faith
I'm aware that Your plans are perfect for me

Sometimes You don't allow the world to deliver
because I have to learn to look only to You
You want to be the source of joy and happiness
Everything else is just a flower on the road

Living with You every day in Your presence
Spending my time and my life for You
makes me understand that You are the King of heaven
and even though I am small, I'm important to You

Die wichtigsten Korrekturen:

• "you" → "You" (durchgehend) – Großschreibung bei Gottesbezug (wie in den vorherigen englischen Liedern).
• "Many things I did not well in my life" → "Many things I did not do well in my life" – fehlendes Verb "do" ergänzt.
• "all has its purpose for you" → "everything has its purpose for You" – "everything" ist im modernen Englisch gebräuchlicher als "all" in dieser Position.
• "Teach me to live with you Lord" → "Teach me to live with You, Lord" – Komma vor der Anrede "Lord" ergänzt.
• "I m knowing that your plans" → "I'm aware that Your plans" – 1) Apostroph ergänzt, 2) "knowing" im Verlaufsform passt bei "know" (Zustandsverb) nicht gut im Englischen; "I'm aware that" (ich bin mir bewusst, dass) ist die natürlichere Formulierung.
• "to look only in you" → "to look only to You" – "look to someone" (sich an jemanden wenden/auf jemanden schauen) ist idiomatischer als "look in".
• "a just flower" → "just a flower" – Wortstellung korrigiert ("just" gehört vor den Artikel, nicht dazwischen).
• "Live with you every day...Spend my time...It makes me understand" → "Living with You every day...Spending my time...makes me understand" – die Satzkonstruktion war uneinheitlich (Imperativ-artige Verben, dann plötzlich "It makes"); durch die Umformung zu Gerundien ("Living", "Spending") als Subjekt des Satzes wird die Struktur grammatisch stimmig: "Living...and spending... makes me understand...".
• "king of heaven" → "King of heaven" – Großschreibung als Ehrentitel.
• "I m important" → "I'm important" – fehlender Apostroph.